Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As technology is being developed, everything is becoming digital. Not only computer but also course, conference, seminar, community, bank, market and so on so forth. One of the biggest fields now is internet shopping - e-commerce. We use it very often to purchase thing and products, it’s the big part of the world’s market solution. Nevertheless, there are some disadvantages, I believe the benefits often outweigh the drawbacks.
There are two big advantages to buy things on the internet. First of all, it’s about security, means personal information can be stolen and could be used fraudulently for the people. Secondly, the product can be fake or not qualitative. Especially for clothes, not fitting size is a common problem.
On the other hand, there are a lot of advantage of online shopping and the main one is its convenience. People don’t have to go the shop and can compare prices of it from anywhere. Only internet and device are needed them. Another key point is that nowadays e-commerce is getting “smarter”, is recommendation system can suggest and predict the product which might be liked by the user. Also, it can offer the goods with similar price, color, size and any similar properties to the one you interested in or bought. It’s exactly beneficial solution for the customer to save time.
To sum up, buying things such as books, groceries, and clothes on the internet has more advantages such as timesaving, available from anywhere and a great deal of opportunity, and outweighs its disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.203187251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11909810533 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0298194409 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167738325344 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533414742929 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678387099276 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118005207592 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08601235523 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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