Can the Internet replace the classroom teacher? Discuss your views.
In today's world, without the use of the internet, people become a handicap. Because most of the work done by the internet. this has been entered in the education system for the last few years. this essay will discuss whether this development replaces the traditional classroom or not.
As a social point of view, the virtual study has more advantages than the traditional study. firstly, it reaches every part of the country. In some place of India, there are less facilities and poor road constructions become barrier between the teacher and students. But the use of online classes, these hadal will be eliminated. secondly, it is the root of the very famous schools and colleges which was designed by great knowledgable professors.so, every person has experienced this structure through the internet. for example, when I was in school, mostly prefer online lectures because it contained various type of methods. In addition, through these, I was able to see this method whenever I became free. so it contain more amount of comfortability.
On the flip side, if the internet replaces the teacher, they will become unemployed. Moreover, they do not share their valuable experience and knowledge, too. there are few drawbacks are present which included, the solution of some problem cannot be done on the internet and maintain the silence in the class is also another problem which can be done by the teachers.
weighting the all compelling arguments from both the sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of classroom training far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of classroom study prove its significance, not this. it also provides a great number of study material as well as teaching flexibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15602836879 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82265939605 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6029465339 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177003089411 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456024717248 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614808464155 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102839103602 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557184229802 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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