Essay topics: Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
the advertisement is the best tool for marketing. Most of the companies approach this facility to promote their products and increase profit. but the customers nowadays affected by this advertisement because of a large number of ads. I am inclined to believe that this development has a negative impact on the customers. The following essay will discuss the causes and prevention that take to curb this situation.
The companies are using advertisement everywhere for promotion and promulgated their product details. but sometimes they use it very vigorously which have a worse impact on the consumers. they present their product with exaggerating information where some of them are completely false. In addition, these ads are very beautiful to attract people. so this consequences that people can buy unnecessary things and sometimes they fall into debt. For example, the survey conducted by the government showed that due to these ads, the expenditure of the people is increased.
Furthermore, mostly, ads have shown on television since it was invented. as a result of these, people can not enjoy their television programme. The commercial on television set increase such a high pace the programme has a number of brakes. so people can not enjoy their programme without interruption.
To prevent this situation, the government strive to introduce a rule on the limitation of advertisement. they should give every company a limited number of commercial permission.so, companies will not make the number of advertising and people cannot face the advertisement related issue in future. this statement is true for united states, where they applied this law to curb the number of commercials and resulted that the complaint related to an advertisement is reduced.
In conclusion, the advertisement is a good source of promoting and give knowledge of the product to the customer. but over usage of these leads to affect the customer's mentality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34415584416 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09361580711 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6221027669 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12779398002 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385359978273 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377520891142 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711191150573 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261964260856 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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