Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
There is growing recognition that with severe emulation among manufacturers, purchasers have been dealt with obstacles regarding massive advertisements. I contend that some positive effects of advertisement for products are undeniable, this may result in adverse impacts on consumers. Several feasible solutions will be examined in details.
One the one hand, it is commonly believed that consumers have to struggle with challenges in terms of choosing their products due to the popularity of advertisement. The first prominent reason is that profitable companies have the tendency to maximizing their revenue via spreading advertisement without emphasis on product’s quality. It is not unusual that these manufacturers frequently aggravate on functions or ingredients that their goods offer. In fact, children those are vulnerable with fascinating information is more likely to make an impulsive purchase. As a result, this can pose a threat to purchaser’s healthy. On the other hand, there is no denying that with the prevalence of advertisement, consumers have become more knowledgeable and less confusion when buying any product. It is a widespread practice that the basic data of products can be easy to seek on the website or bullets, this means that consumers may take consideration deliberately of products that they have the intention to possess.
In my point, some measures should be taken in order to protect purchasers' benefits. Initially, the government needs to impose a restriction on advertisements that exacerbate the amount of information from products. For instance, if advertised information trigger extreme consequences such as death or fatal diseases, manufacturing companies must suffer punishment strictly, even imprisoned. The second thing is that consumers need to raise awareness of inferior products or low-quality one. Consumers should not be over-reliant on details of products. It is essential that they have the capacity to distinguish the variety of products that gain high quality and rationality.
It seems to me that the influences of advertisement are more and more profound on making the purchase on both side, drawbacks and benefits. I firmly believe that solutions to addressing this phenomenon are diverse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, so, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65588235294 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32417354508 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9800024153 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185529586133 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543073954946 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357776918192 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104622981006 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383191440106 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.