The shown pie charts illustrate data about distribution of the amount of the water on 4 various targets in the given countries.
The shown pie charts illustrate data about distribution of the amount of the water on 4 various targets in the given countries. Overall, The developing regions consume water significantly on agriculture use, while affluent areas use the primary amount of water for industrial use.
As is observed from the graph, the percentage of industrial use in north america accounts for approximately a half in total, followed by agricultural use, at nearly 40%. The lowest figure is on domestic use, at only 13%. Similarly, Eroupe uses considerably the amount of water on industrial purpose, at more 50%. Only 15% in total is consumed on domestic use. It is obvious that the remaining countries develop a similar pattern. These countries have used a third quarter or more of water share on agriculture use. The most remarkable figure is in the central Asia, with the figure reaching 88%. Furthermore proportion of industrial use in South Africa and south eastasia are 10% and 12% respectively compared to under 10% in Africa and central Asia. Moreover, south america set the second priority on domestic use while there is above 10% in the rest of countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05789473684 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85688651402 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8018797169 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214579109212 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114873832491 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.282006498347 0.0843802449381 334% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294124583043 0.15604864568 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.254262756449 0.0819641961636 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.