Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
These day’s more and more consumers are faced the bombardment of advertisement by competing companies. This essay will describe how the advertisement influence the viewers preference and how to protect this issue. In the course of my essay will try to shade on light the reasons that have shaped my opinion.
It is admitted that advertising plays many role in global competitive industries. The advertisements are settled to affect the viewers psychology by routine watching in various media which stick on the viewers mind. This way becomes main reason why the marketing department harness the popularity of artist to gain whole target. For example, the smartphone companies often contract international artist as brand ambassador to promote the sophisticated features. As a result, the advertisement became more effective.
However, some people believe that the advertisement disturb or reduce the quality time when they enjoy the tv programmes on the other media so that they try to find the solutions how to stop or reduce the advertisement effect. Firstly, the viewers can change the channel program when the advertisement appear. Secondly, installing advertisement block software will be the best option to escape from aggressive ads. But, it is difficult to avoid the massive commercial ads because nowadays the advertisements are spreading out bin the majority of social media which is used as promotion facility. It is no doubt that advertisements invant many media ads we need to effort to disappear it.
In conclusion, it is clear that the product advertisements are arranged by marketing expert to persuade the potential costumers. Nevertheless, there are several ways to prevent from ads effect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
...dvertisements are settled to affect the viewers psychology by routine watching in vario...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42910447761 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12871521191 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6152815575 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209400444882 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677002775945 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541013913672 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11571275562 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430678047125 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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