Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’
How true do you think this statement is?
What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
The rate of buying new cars is increasing at such a high speed, that will become a serious issue in many cities around the world. There are many cities which are facing problems of frequent traffic jams and huge increase of traffic on roads at peak hours. Government must look into the increasing number of car ownership to tackle this issue.
I quite agree to the statement while returning from work to home I see more number of cars every day. So many times there are traffic jams which are also increasing day by day. The car ownership has tremendous growth because, the middle-class man wants to live luxurious life and travel together with his family. To have a car also increases the status of living in the society. To counter this, government should levy some taxes on having a car, to save this extra added tax people might not buy a car.
Many car manufacturing companies are introducing budget cars to target lower income people to buy a car. Also many banks provide a car loans on such low interests. This results in growing the number of car owners. The government should tell banks to raise the interest rates and also promotes the usage of public transport. Many people don’t use buses or trains due to lack of cleanliness and the damaged condition of public transports. Municipal corporation or transport authority perform fitness check and ensure proper maintenance of public transport vehicles. The frequency of local transport also be increased in high traffic area this will help to reduce the traffic-jam.
I believe if the government takes these measures promptly this will surely reduce the rising number of car ownership. It will help many cities by reduce in number of traffic jams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...arget lower income people to buy a car. Also many banks provide a car loans on such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86689419795 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52909544656 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3023567686 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8823529412 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47058823529 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336876726128 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113429632498 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517591162917 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216231678252 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256019782565 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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