Children in many places are suffering child abuse What are the causes and the effects of it

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Children in many places are suffering child abuse . What are the causes and the effects of it?

It is undeniable that in various regions, many children nowadays are engaged in a serious maltreatment. There are many reasons that can be put forward to explain this problem which entails significant impacts on youngsters being abused.

To begin with, victimization of children is led to by two primary grounds. Firstly, It is for revenge. In other words, adults who experienced abuse in their childhood are more likely to maltreat the next generations because this happens so frequently that they mistake it for a social norm. Secondly, there are still unrealistic expectations to the immature. Specifically in remote areas, owing to the deficiency in sufficient education, adults have a lack of understanding about a child’s developmental stages and behaviors. Therefore, children of very early ages in those areas often have to work with their parents in the fields or in some illegitimate private factories.

Consequently, negative impacts on the young will be seriously inevitable if this problem is not thoroughly eradicated. The most noteworthy issue is stress. Because stress in such early brain development will lead to disruption in mental growth, maltreated children may indulge themselves in bad behaviors such as smoking and high-risk sexual behaviors. What is of equal seriousness is that the young abused are more likely not to adequately profit from education. For instance, they have to work so much that they don’t have time and energy for schooling activities, or they have to suffer other forms of maltreatment such as sexual abuse, so they feel ashamed to continue being with their peers. Studies have proved that children who experienced any form of maltreatment in childhood have a 13% greater likelihood of not graduating from schools.

All in all, some rationales can be identified for child abuse and its consequences should not be underestimated. Therefore, we need to take actions to limit those negative effects to bring a brighter future for children around the globe.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33647798742 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02286979249 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8708355481 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159645658915 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463263769657 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388368423824 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973677863813 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213209241589 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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