City planners' new designs include setting up schools, markets and commercial places (like offices) in different areas of the city. Do you think it will help the city dwellers?
Nowadays, more and more people burgeoning in the cities to enjoy the facilities. This increase the responsibility of city planners to include new schools, markets and offices in their maps. The mentioned view seems tempting to me and I will extend my points in further paragraphs.
Initially, introducing new schools in every part of the city is mandatory to maintain literacy rate. Because of the availability of education institutes in different areas, children can grab the opportunities to enlarge their horizons of knowledge and can ensure a better future of cities. In India, for instance, the government has made it certain to add new schools in most of the parts of new emerging metropolitan areas to provide good quality education.
Furthermore, the intended new shops and markets in cities will certainly reduce strain among citizens to travel a long distance to buy day to day amenities. This will not only decrease the stress in residents, but also provide various options for them to purchase thinks. Likewise, commercial places such as offices provide facilities for inhabitants to apply for job requirements. Thus, these places will help youngsters of cities to get employment there.
In conclusion, I completely agree that new schools, markets and industrial areas in various places in cities can aid the populace by minimizing illiteracy and by maximizing opportunities of employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32882882883 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03194647977 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2994050717 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350865994712 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122933415279 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827219022244 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196632626949 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351542375831 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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