Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?
According to the statement, business sectors should supply sports and other social services to local society for their improvement and development. However, it seems to me as strong disagreement towards this notion and reasons are explained in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there is responsibility of legal authorities to provide such services as sports, transportation and so on, instead of business companies. Because, there are plenty of reasons due to which business sectors should not done such practices. The first and foremost factor is, they should provide maximum concentration on their productivity and employees rather than to provide aid to local society. Because, there are number of employees who are worked in such buisness companies and they represent their hard work to incline the productivity of their company. Therefore, companies should give attention to increase the wages of their labours and provide bonuses for their extra time work. Because, it is essential for them, due to which workers become loyal to their company and be more dedicated. As a result, this shows positive aspect towards their business, because if employees show more dedication towards their work, hence the company will go forward to their progression due to their superior tasks.
Furthermore, the another factor is their low funds. In this criteria, there are number of companies which are suffered from declination of their funds. Therefore, they should concern towards their financial conditions and their progression rather to give aid for local groups. Because, if they provide such aids therefore they may leads to stuck in bankrupt due to their worse financial situations which they may spend on unless works of local community. Apart from that, the another major factor behind this criteria is, high risk of decline in progression and their popularity. Because, there are numerous companies which provides social aid and due to this, they face such problems. For instance, in Europe, a small business company provided funds to local group instead of seek their financial situations. Hence, their doors became closed because they were gone under dept due to low budget.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, business sections are not responsible to provide social aid for local communities. Because, this shows negative impression on them such as go under bankrupt, dept and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39153439153 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75047809582 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2736826399 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.263157895 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17260423085 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715804089119 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663135563436 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129549937053 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010806775922 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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