Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method?”
Businesses has become more advanced these days with increment in technological aspects. There are several technique to incline businesses sales such as advertising and hiring knowledgble staff but the most effective is advertisement according to me and i will discussed my views in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, the first and foremost method is marketing. In other words, mostly owners use this way to boost their occupation because if they provides information about their trade in magazines so, individuals get details about company and buy product from their trade. For instance, gucchi brand which is selling product to clothes and always gave ads in newspaper has more consumers. Another way is employees. Businessman always try to hire best staff member because a occupation could not get success without sweet employees. As a result, profesion require good staff and advertisement to become successful.
However, mostly commerce give discount to customer because when any person buy product from shops and if the product quality and price are good so, the consumer come back in the occupation and buy more products. On the other hand, the most effective technique is marketing. To make it more clear, a company do not grow without any advertisement because people have not information about trade so, the marketing help the customer to get details about commerce.
In conclusion, companies use different way to grow their sales such as advertisement and drop the prices of product but the most effective method to increase bussiness is marketing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun technique seems to be countable; consider using: 'several techniques'.
Suggestion: several techniques
...ent in technological aspects. There are several technique to incline businesses sales such as adv...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve is advertisement according to me and i will discussed my views in subsequent p...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...dvertisement according to me and i will discussed my views in subsequent paragraphs. T...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
... boost their occupation because if they provides information about their trade in magazi...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s try to hire best staff member because a occupation could not get success withou...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...keting. To make it more clear, a company do not grow without any advertisement be...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etails about commerce. In conclusion, companies use different way to grow thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34274193548 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86772367914 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8358121896 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238973768458 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824208644586 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995481670215 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169002010747 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118183222103 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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