compare (or contrast) between living at home and living away from home
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to experience away from home instead of their homeland, particularly in rural areas, due to the different reasons. These two ways posses many strong distinctions that will discuss below.
Firstly, in comparison, the living conditions, when people live with their family, bring several advantages. One of the significant reasons behind this is to facility change. Due to the electronic devices like washing machines, dryers, tidying your house is easier than ever. Opposite, they usually pay for the services or don’t have enough types of equipment to use when living alone. Moreover, if they find exhausted, people will share it with their family members. Conversely, living far away from home, people might feel lonely from being alone and carry out all things themselves. Although living distancing can much inconvenient than at home, people can take care of themselves and gain independence, which establishes a foundation for their adulthood.
Secondly, environmental changes cause such trouble for their own life from time to time. One reason for this is that in their homeland, the neighbors get on with them, but in a different place, people need to accommodate themselves to the new people, so they can find it hard to make friends, even they need to accept a new local culture. For example, various regions, as well as traditions, are the hardest problem to handle, as a result, you gain the experience to change many variable situations that will help you ready for the social change.
Finally, since people get together with their whole family, the monthly finance is low, but a household person financial is such a huge amount of money. For example, if they are a student who lives at home, they never worry about paying bills for renting, public service. Therefore, they can save money and have good financed. On the contrary, people who live away from home have to calculate on their property. Although they get pressure with it, people can more self-reliant and learn how to manage their finance, which is one of the important values that they can improve themselves.
Conclusively, dependent living undoubtedly exists in some inconvenient aspects, but additionally obtains an incredible opportunity for positively enhancing valuable skills and adding more delightful excitement to eternal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21989528796 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71203683114 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594240837696 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2674389977 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221468133586 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806338336344 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104883022267 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124312879807 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879719307045 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.