Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
In society today, people tend to more competitive in life. In my perspective, I believe that this tendency brings positive and negative impacts, and this essay will outline two sides of this view.
On the one hand, the rivalry encourages each other to make more efforts to get the best results. It is a strong and legitimate reason for more people to work harder, reduce indifference or laziness, and promote innovation and a desire to improve themselves. For example, people with a sense of emulation help them become more responsible. Once they set a goal, they will pursue and work hard with an extremely high sense of responsibility. Even more, people will find their work more interesting and engaging than before, from that, it gives them something to look forward to and create better motivation.
On the other hand, contention can also pose some potential risks. Firstly, unfair competition can increase the level of stress and pressure on relationships around. This will eventually have an adverse influence on their place of study and work because anxiety will displace their ability to concentrate, leading to reduced productivity and efficiency at study as well as work. Furthermore, by reason of competition, among the collective will appear outstanding faces, they act as if they are " the main character". The team concept is almost automatically forgotten. In the workplace, The lack of teamwork is counterproductive because every employee starts working towards different goals, instead of working towards a common purpose. As a result, this will harm the company since it undermines effective communication between people which is essential for a successful and prosperous business.
In conclusion, competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies, it stimulates people to work hard to reach their desired goals. However, being competition may sabotage a person's relationships with the people around. I think that a person should find a balance and avoid being too competitive, otherwise, the consequence can be severe.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36503067485 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10050479172 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2545327376 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182947391649 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062467745202 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903861696337 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131441969276 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848172669297 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.