Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is widely acknowledged that our life today is much more convenient than in the past thanks to a great deal of invention. And whether computers are the most important or not is a perennial debate. From my personal view, I totally agree that computers have changed our life in an unbelievable way since its first appearance.
First,computers appeared to be a phenomenal invention in the past because of its great perks.Actually it made people aware of a tool that could connect others irrespective of the boundary distance.Then this invention was the driving force behind the huge development of the internet and tons of changes in our life.For example, about one hundred years ago, with a computer, you could develop it into a calculator,television or even a communication tool. All of what it brought about came as a great surprise to all people in the globe
Additionally, computers are considered to be the main factor to our modern life these days. We have developed this to be a multiple function to suit the needs. Not surprisingly that it contribute to a country's wealth and opens up an era of economic prosperity .There is an eclectic mix of areas that computers do wonders for, for instance, medical health care, schooling,online shopping,... Last but not least, computers are not too expensive in spite of its great abilities so that it could be available to the mass. It would be definitely wrong to say that our life did not rely on computers.
In conclusion, I believe computer play a pivotal role in our life in the past, at the present and in the future. So no there is no invention to be at the same level of computers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1604551024 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.847842003 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.090909091 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169834729307 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619364550135 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392942144004 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939376282707 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269972916419 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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