The consumption of the resources on the earth is increasing at an alarming rate and above a dangerous level. What are the causes of this? What can be done to reduce it?
Overuse of earth’s natural resources is becoming more and more at the highest level of human utilization and this is leading to the hazardous condition of concern to our planet. Several causes related to this will be elucidated on this essay followed by a number of possible solutions also provided to minimize this issue.
Regarding to the main factor, it is undeniable fact that human overpopulation affects the great demand of the resources to fulfill their living without taking into account the amount of the materials taken by. Since overconsumption and improper lifestyle are uncontrollable, billion people in every country become part of forest exploitation arbitrarily and massively to produce several goods, for example cloths, houses, foot-wears, foods and paper products in every single day. Moreover, the higher request of oil from transportations and machine industries inclines and filling fuel energy to multitude of vehicles relies on fossil fuels. As a result, fuel gas reserves in the world are extremely restricted, taking petroleum, gasoline and diesel as an example, is currently predicted having less than forty percent left to be fulfilled in the next seventy years.
Turning to the methods to address, the government role is very essential to preserve this over utilization. The first counteraction, the states need to manage the rate and capacity of resources depleted by encouraging people to support the green movements, such as anti-consumerism, green economics, ecological economics, simple living, minimalism, etc. Resulting the fact that this campaign would bring better natural awareness and preservation in throughout the world. In addition, authorities should provide the budget to develop alternative energies by replacing fossil fuel. For instance, introducing affordable and clean biomass energy and hydrogen fuel cell is an effective way to attract people by changing their fuels.
In conclusion, it is inevitable fact that overutilization of resources could bring negative effect to our ecosystem. Human explosion and oil demand rate are the main causes affecting this, however the government authority to reduce the number of resources depleted in this planet by establish several green actions is worth implementing to bring the world into better place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... improper lifestyle are uncontrollable, billion people in every country become part of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59714285714 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03049130522 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8704538465 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.692307692 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15925683493 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496920794394 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049050080248 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104040428095 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608542310393 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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