The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The increase of the global population is concerning many people, who consider it as the most serious issue we have to tackle nowadays. The reasons that have led to this situation are related on one side with the poorness of underdeveloped countries and, on the other side, with the richness of the wealthiest ones. However, I strongly believe that, even if the population will continue to grow steadily in the next years, we will have enough technological instruments to handle the situation.
The population keep growing both in poorest and richest countries. In the case of the former, births are rising because people cannot afford prevention methods and, thus, they have no instruments to limit the spread of births. By contrast, births has also rosen in the wealthiest nations. The main cause of this is that families are that rich that they can afford to have more than two children and so families are enlarging even more.
However, I am sure it is not the main problem of our generation. As a matter of fact, it would have been a serious issue in the last century when we had not the resources to feed the whole population. Yet, today technology is able to create synthetic food and give the right nutrition to everybody. Furthermore, the previous booms of birth that we have experienced in our history had not permanent consequences, so we should focus on more serious problems. In fact, we should be more worried about a possible climate disaster, that, as many scientists are arguing, would have permanent damages on our planet and maybe, would cause the death of the whole population.
In conclusion, even if global population is growing even more in particular in the richest and in the poorest countries, we should not consider it as our greatest problem. As a matter of fact we have all the resources both to monitor and to even manage it in the worst case scenario.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
The increase of the global population is concerning many people, who consider it as the mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81846153846 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71037279909 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3245101958 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825843376627 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296730724562 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275258637585 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532276310512 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147942086223 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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