Countries are becoming more and more sim ilar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With rapid development of internet technology, the interactions among many countries have become more and more frequent than before. Benefiting from the trend of globalization, many products have been available for people to purchase anywhere in the world. A prevailing view held by many people is that this trend is a negative development since countries are becoming similar, while I strongly disagree with them.
First, it’s not plausible that countries will lose their own traits and get similar as the same products are bought by their people. Since traits belonging to a country is largely determined by the lifestyle and culture there, each country can retain their own cultures and traits, which won’t be influenced by increasing interactions with others.
Globalization certainly is a positive development for every country in many aspects. To be more specific, as the customers are not only domestic people but also people from other nations, which indicates a significant increase of revenue resource of the business companies. Furthermore, growing number of transactions with the rest of world will entail a strong growth in domestic economy, leading to a better life of people. Moreover, global transactions will be instrumental for people to learn about different cultures in the rest of world. It’s not possible for a district’s culture to stay unchanged for a long time of period and it needs to move forward as well. The frequent communications generated by these business transactions will undoubtedly render every culture flourish and be more colorful than it ever was.
In a conclusion, people always concern that interactions with other culture might have some detrimental effects on their own country. However, in fact, it’s the opposite. Globalization helps not only the development of culture but also the economy, bringing people a huge amount of benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42905405405 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96936013587 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7263766508 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224512786388 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777291436221 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060666326517 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132587275028 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872356206203 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.