It is presumed by certain set of societies that with the passage of time, countries are undoubtedly, becoming alike because similar products are scattered everywhere around the globe; however, I believe that this trend has more benefits as it assists the communities to buy commodities at lower price and within short interval of time but at the same time, the drawbacks cannot be denied.
The two main benefits of the rendered notion are saving of money and time constraint. Mostly people disburse colossal amount of money to purchase the international brands with high taxes along with freight charges. Technology acts as a helping hand for people to attain the things at lower price in their dwelling countries. For instance, Japan is the origin of automobiles of Toyota brand. Due to globalization and the upsurge in technology, the outlets of this brand are available all around the world and one can buy the product at low cost instead of buying it directly from Japan. Also, enjoying the products at the door step minimizes the wait for months to receive the product. One can get the things within short interval of time. For example, genuine Swiss watches are mostly manufactured in Switzerland, and there are no original dealers of Swiss wrist watches in Bangladesh therefore, if someone wishes to purchase 100% original Swiss watches than the person will have to wait for at least 30-40 days in order to receive his order. Alternatively, availability of similar genuine watches in Bangladesh can save time.
On the contrary, loss of traditions, culture and diversity can be seen as the grave negative point of this development. People are more inclined towards the western culture and get lured by the things which ultimately tends the traditional products to lose their importance. To quote an example, the fashion in the western countries is considered at the top by alluring more people towards it. The easy availability of the products changes the mindset of people regarding the fashion and they want to jump into the bandwagon without thinking of any consequences. Thusly, the traditional clothes and things have been swiped away by the western products.
After having the discussion on the most pertinent points of this trend, I feel the only logical conclusion is that the availability of similar type of items everywhere is extremely useful for wealthy people as they can save both time and money, which I feel, could be spent in doing other activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, in short, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0684596577 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72782192018 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7315815241 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5625 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207173322359 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586459737414 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558011717373 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127208064555 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522204574998 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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