countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today’s society only has slightly different to the other because they tend to do or deal in similarity. Everything seems contagious for each other and they keep habituating this fact. I assume this behaviour circle could spread more negative impacts and those explanation should be stated here.
Like the increasing of modernity, civilisations always upgrade vast aspects in their life. Start from daily style, meal, activity, etc. Many people are gaining their standard to be more glamour. But in general case, it is affected by the figures who have show off a wealthy habit, such as actress, model, singer, and the other entertainer. They often describe implicitly about “how lucky I am” with proofing the branded attires, expensive stuffs, and glory vehicles. Accordingly, most of them exemplify higher detrimental. People become obsess and attempt to set as such equally. Particularly in millennial become addict and engage confidence crisis.
In addition, that problem is responsible for consumerism. Individu dare to spend a huge outgo to fulfil their unnecessary desire. In reality, It is easy to find a middle-down person in department store, and watching them dealing transaction for various stuffs. This is one of example behind this hot issue. Another illustration is plenty of teenagers force their parents to give them the high-end mobile phones or we can say Iphone. Meanwhile, everybody knows In some countries Iphone has an unbelievable price.
the equality in society may have to be improved if the concern intend to the beneficial things such as social motion, charity, and volunteering. It is not true if focusing in semblance or something useless where supply any downsides.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this explanation' or 'those explanations'?
Suggestion: this explanation; those explanations
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Suggestion:
...the high-end mobile phones or we can say Iphone. Meanwhile, everybody knows In so...
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, so, while, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39033457249 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87202089624 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721189591078 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4111464805 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3157894737 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121508486737 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031899089279 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043990303202 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615523936069 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478291641189 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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