The similarities between countries are indeed more obvious nowadays. Because of globalization, it is available for people to try and purchase any goods from any countries. Although this modern process brings benefits in some ways, I strongly believe that it has harbored many negative implications than positive ones.
The rapid acceleration in cultural exchanges has homogenized the world’s cultures gradually, which has resulted in the loss of local culture in many countries. If the relentless advance of international brands into every corner continues, these bland packages might one day completely oust the traditional objects of a nation, which would be a loss of richness and diversity of the world, as well as the sad disappearance of the manifestations of place’s character.
The spread of multinational corporations can be detrimental to the economy of countries. Many locals have been becoming xenophile as they prefer to purchase the same products that are manufactured by well-known companies in developed countries such as electronics of Apple or casual clothes from Zara, perhaps thinking them glamorous than the ones made by domestic brands. Tourism numbers may also be affected, as travelers become disillusioned with finding every place just the same as the one they visited previously. To see the same products in shops the world over is boring and does not impel visitors to open their wallets in the same way that trinkets and souvenirs unique to that particular area do.
While globalization entitles people to have access to the same products, I think we should consider a careful approach to protect local culture’s uniqueness and avoid the dominance of abroad goods in our domestic market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...lization, it is available for people to try and purchase any goods from any countries. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, while, i think, such as, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39483394834 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0367277439 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8662639122 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.2 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232146704153 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076360281063 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571544351107 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113590891281 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668172883323 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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