Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that, nowadays, the nations all over the world have the same characteristics due to habitats can buy the things in any countries. I argue that, this trend are bring about benefits for the development.
On the one hand, peopele can take anything they want in any countries all over the world have some negatives in some aspects. Firstly, if people can buy the product in any country, it would increase the competition price between nations and it might be affected the balanace price in the market. In addition, the sellers can take advantages from this trade by increase or decrease the price to attract buyer and it will make the product loss the value they have. Secondly, because of the supplier go up, some producers can use the material has lower quality to reduce the overhead cost. Therefore, they can sell their products with cheaper price in the market but because of that, the producer cannot ensure the quality of the products and it will be easier break and even harmful with the health of consumer it the products is food.
On the other hand, I believe that the products were made-popularised and people can buy in anywhere will beneficial in some ways. Firstly, because of the difference in the value of money between nations, it will be more advantage for people in the developed countries if they buy somethings in the developing countries because they just need to spend lower the amount of money to owned the similar products. As the results, they can save money and use it to other things. Secondly, this trend is the good way to help the country growth the economic. In other words, although with the one product but it was produced in different countries, it still bring the characteristics of that nation. Therefore, the government should invest more in the famous product and add the stickers or the message that contain the beauty of their nations, it will increase the awareness of the consumers about the countries. Consequently, that make the country receive more money from the investor to expand quantity of products and even the investment to improve the economic.
In conclusion, although people can buy the similar things in any nations have some drawbacks developmets, it evident to me that, it bring the development with more benefits to not only for residents, but also for whole country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.845 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62509047463 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4475 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.567162965 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.2 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313340836188 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100925234303 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531516256322 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181942651219 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598748379288 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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