As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society?
In this day and age, the size of families has changed with an increase in the number of nuclear families and individual types. There are many reasons cause this phenomenon, and the effects on society are mostly negative.
On the one hand, there are many factors causing the breakdown of the traditional family structures, ranging from social development to the change in public perception. Firstly, economic development brings a huge change in family life. As the social-economic development keeps unfolding, a large number of youngsters of the millennial generation opt to live alone in order to be able to fully enjoy their own life rather than be bothered with tedious household duties. Moreover, the position of women is higher than ever before which changes the family structure. According to recent research, due to financial independence and the high social position, the proportion of single-mom is ever-creasing.
As the structure of the family changes, the bond between members seems to become weaker which could cause a series of social problems. Firstly, loneliness and insecurity is a detriment that needs to be considered. Take Japan as an example, there is an increase in the proportion of elderly people living alone and lacking contacts with society, who after that die in loneliness and remain undiscovered for a long time. Moreover, children growing up in families with only a mother or father easily suffer from mental diseases and at risk of committing a crime in the future, as a result of the latest studies.
In conclusion, as a result of changes in lifestyle and economy, the nuclear family type becomes more popular and exert negative impacts on the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...l-economic development keeps unfolding, a large number of youngsters of the millennial generation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17454545455 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87420905397 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7884413181 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163143363222 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608702569867 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520593487116 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101706325815 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705195452438 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.