Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words, pictures, music, or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no governmwnt restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevent examoles from your own knowledge and experience.
Freedom is one of the most serious issue to all jib workers as private and government organisation. However, creative artists should be free to express their ways, ides, opinion in every genre like pictures, music, or films. In my opinion , i reckon that artists live and work without restrictions by government. And i will shed my views on below paragraphs.
To commence with. First and foremost, in my country, only one profession is work independently without any type of restriction as they people generate different ideas and earn more money as compared with other field people. For examples, all the richest familes of my nation belongs to Acting, making movies, production houses, director teams, photography, modelling etcetera. They pupils rule the world.
Moving further actors and artists all things wants in life whatever they wish They earn too much money with distinct ideas. Therefor, they are multitaskered as work in picture , music industry films. They become a billaniore middle class people so i pondes they work with free minds and live in freedom so government should be no restriction to other profession because these people also want freedom to express their feelings in the related genre.
In compendium, all the masses have rights to live a restriction and freedom life in their work places.
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- Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music film in whichever way they wish There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this s 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, for example, i reckon, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16822429907 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70471822671 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630841121495 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.7512146064 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267458829627 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904040188284 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692368574208 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149571915372 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770846046269 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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