Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give your reasons with own knowledge and give examples.
Personally, I totally agree that creative artists should be free to express their ideas. The reason is that artists should not be associated with the government. Artists should perform their art without any government restrictions.
Moreover, the government's pressure in the first place was a reason why people started expressing their ideas in words, pictures, choreographies, music. Art is meant to be free. If the government does not let artists to express their ideas in their ways then it would not be an art. When there was pressure, restrictions people were not given the freedom to express their ideas. For that particular reason, people started expressing their ideas by performing their arts. Some showed their emotions through their dances, some showed their life struggles through music, some showed their love through poet and many more.
However, what would happen if the government started to restrict? In my opinion, even if there were government restrictions, creative artists would find a way to express their ideas as they did in the past. On the other hand, the government cannot put pressure on art no matter how hard they try because it is called creative artists for a reason. I believe that government would not be able to understand arts. That is why they cannot stop it because no doubt they would not know what artists are projecting to people while performing arts.
In conclusion, art will always be free despite the fact that there will be times when the government tries to stop them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aphies, music. Art is meant to be free. If the government does not let artists to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06746031746 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60569890675 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496031746032 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1770952707 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360659749133 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140846765218 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560423137768 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220628150439 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074754290323 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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