crime
Crime is unquestionably one of the most prevailing and worrying aspects in our society. The increased crime rates not only bring loss of lives, it instills a sense of fear among people. Boundaries often get created and beings start limiting themselves to their comfort zone. Crime prevention, therefore, should be taken very seriously and can be achieved in various ways.
Firstly, the presence of local authorities in ensuring the incorruptible law enforcement might sound costly but is an investment that will pay dividends in long term. A safer region helps in to set examples for others, especially the younger generations. For instance, crime has dramatically been reduced in Kolkata setting stage for the areas near by.
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Secondly, government needs to invest in regions at a very minute level. Funding money to stationing police headquarters in and around slums is one way of reducing crimes. It will help in improving the lives of many living.
Thirdly, crime has a very global impact and makes global cooperation very critical. Operating in a parochial way can incur significant financial losses and render any expenditure futile. For instance, Pakistan and India fight over Kashmir has yet not given a result, but the lives of India, Pakistan and Kashmir have been in terror for the past 67 years.
To conclude, illegal activities are a costly and dangerous fact in the present global economy. However, with large-scale government investment is an attainable goal. Even more, by spreading the international cooperation, the resources can be invested significantly for a more effective result in reducing crime impact.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... in Kolkata setting stage for the areas near by. crime Secondly, government needs...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Crime
...setting stage for the areas near by. crime Secondly, government needs to invest...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun living seems to be countable; consider using: 'many livings'.
Suggestion: many livings
... It will help in improving the lives of many living. Thirdly, crime has a very global im...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a parochial way" with adverb for "parochial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...al cooperation very critical. Operating in a parochial way can incur significant financial losses ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33846153846 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92220634809 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7066017377 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273012434489 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885686682332 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101823756315 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121525773073 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095625177348 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.