While in the majority of countries, crime appears to be surging day by day, especially among youth. The origins of this seem to stem from three factors, while several remedies appear to be open to us.
Perhaps the major factor here is the advancement of technology and emergence of social media substantially influenced the habit of young generation. For instance, youth try to imitate the bad behaviours pictured in social platforms. This led them to do violation ranging from vandalism to robbing. Another cause is the lack of strict rules in several countries. Sometimes government may lack to put forward new rules for minor crimes as well as not imposing severe punishment to the criminal. A third factor is the inability of education system to provide awareness about crimes and not punishing for their silly mistakes. At the same time, parents not aware of their child and not guiding them properly. All this action can lead young people to become a criminal.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be to establish new punishments such as longer year of imprisonment and huge amount of fine may hinder people from doing criminal activities. A second remedy might be for the government to provide a sense of awareness about the crime and its consequence for the children from school level itself, it would reduce the delinquency by the young generation. Finally, parents and teachers should perhaps be more flexible in their attitude towards the pupil and correct their mistakes properly, thereby it will not be led to huge risks.
In summary, the factors of social media influence and inability of government punishment strategies are appear to be the main causes. A coordinated response by the state, institutions, and individuals may well lessen the severity of the situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appeared'.
Suggestion: appeared
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, second, so, third, well, while, for instance, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11486486486 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77316098356 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1112663987 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213819990381 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660790284214 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558032983816 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133083990175 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606344214187 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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