criminals have a low level of education. the best way to reduce crime levels is to educate people in prisons. Agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, the crime rate is on the rise. It is not only the thieves or the killer but also the internet criminal, who have high intellection and good education. That is why, from my point of view, I absolutely disagree with this way, which applies to education in prison, to reduce crime.
First of all, the generation of criminal thoughts is from within each person's thoughts. It is just like an instinct of humans, which like an animal in nature and they cannot stop their actions by human perception. The fact that world medical background has recorded many cases, which cannot control their instinct, especially the syndrome with a double Y chromosome in the sex chromosome. In this case, patients have difficulty controlling their violent behaviors, which can easily lead to legal problems. In a near survey, 90 percent of people having this syndrome is the criminal and 80% in this number have a good education. This makes the argument about education affecting the crime rate considered ineffective.
Secondly, in recent decades, the rate of crime signs has increased among educated people. The reason to commit a crime is not only because of hobbies or life but also because of people's daily fatigue that makes them lose control of themselves. Sadly, today, people are increasingly chasing their money and forgetting about their own hobbies or dreams that make them happy doing their job. And the stress is increasing more and more every day until they cannot control themselves and surrendering their inner virginity as anger, sadness, or boredom. The droplet that caused the beaker to overflow, they will do things more according to their feelings than their reason. In the US, 30% criminal is the officer, who works for a big company.
In conclusion, a person's thoughts and negative feelings are the reason to make the criminal, it is influenced almost exclusively by education. That is why, in my opinion, we do not need to have an education in prison, which we need is ways to direct prisoners to open up to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94460641399 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6209507159 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5761284454 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7647058824 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236561550672 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753254345794 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861363570252 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159113201801 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690199808935 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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