Current years a great number of teens are deciding to study oversea What are the advantages and disadvantages of this issue

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Current years a great number of teens are deciding to study oversea.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.

In recent years, students get used to dream about studying abroad. But there are some ups and downs of studying in different countries. This essay will discuss both sides of studying another states and points out important stages.
Studying abroad may give you better education and life experience. It also can learn new languages as well as culture of foreign countries. Furthermore, If student go abroad for studying they will communicate with foreign people and face up to new culture and destination. As a result, students will be able to not only more knowledge but also new information about strangers. As well as, studying and living abroad can expand peoples’ out look and they make friends there. In addition, one of my classmates went to Canada for studying oversea about two years ago. She always writes me about her new friends and education systems of the nation.
On the other hand, studying abroad has few disadvantages. A lot of students who went to a foreign country face to homesickness, because of being far from their family, friends and home. It leads to them sadness and depression. Another words, some people who go another country, often come back to their hometown because of finance.
In conclusion, studying in a different country is very good for teenager’s future life if they return to their home during every summer holiday. And then, they will have not any problems. In addition, people who study abroad may find a good job related to their job to their knowledge, experience and skills. Moreover, they can have a better future than other teens

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: ANOTHER_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in other words'?
Suggestion: In other words
...t leads to them sadness and depression. Another words, some people who go another country, of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96992481203 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61054970365 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3168453357 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4444444444 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101978391451 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347892560483 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035240095002 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645736308267 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321425925886 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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