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Cycling is more environmentally-friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? How to increase its popularity?

It is agrued that cycling is more environmentally-friendly than other means of transport. However, nowadays bicycle is not popular in many countries all around the world. The following will analyse the main reason of this epidemic and then discuss the possible solutions of the problem.
From my point of view, the foremost cause of this phenomenon are its unconvenience and the appearence of new innovation in the modern era. First of all, not only does cycling waste their time if the individual use bicycle as their main transport, but also a various of enery need to be provided by citizens, reducing their productivity in their companies. Furthermore, in the internationall world and with the appearence of modern technology that bicycle has been replaced by helpful transport such as automatic car or electric motobike, so cycling has been forgot by the young generation. To illustrate, there were only over 5 percent of the adults population in europian nations use bike frequency.
The possible solution of this problem include valuable campain and describle its benefits for the individual life. The government can establish a interesting competition for advertising bicycle activities. Moreover, the immune systerm can be improve significantly which help them to avoid blood pressure and depression and also numerous advantage ifluence will be affected by this action. For instance, there was a survey by Dickan Rice, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of postgradute in London who ejoy to cycling. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has got a plenty of achevement in their career.
To conclude, this phenomenon is a huge trouble that affect a lot of citizens. It is mainly caused by its unconvenience and the appearence of new innovation and solutions is valuable campain and describle its benefits for the individual life.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28523489933 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1217235425 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1292028373 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142769474552 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534053132949 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101534962181 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103226395734 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10831408282 0.056905535591 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments