Despite being aware of the potential harm of smoking, not many people are willing to quit it.
Why is this the case? What can be done to encourage people to quit smoking?
It is true that although all of the people know that smoking is realy dangerous for their health conditions ,just small fraction of them are willing to quit it.This is because they are realy addicted to nicontine and also they are not active people.But these can be overcome via straightforward measures.
As for the reasons,primarily,cigarettes are produced by companies with strong amount of nicotine.For this reason,after smooking people are willing to smoke again and again,since nicotine is product which can cause strong addiction.Althought most of the vegetables contain this productsuch as tomato ,they dont have enought amount of nicotine for addicting.But when it comes to the cigarettes,amount of nicotine is enought for addicting.For this reason although most of the people are eager to leave it unfortunately,they are always defeated by their strong emotions,since nicotine augment their addictions.In addition,althought ,cigarettes are just too expensive all over the world,people can afford them easily,since most of the people who smoking have huge amount of budget.Thats why ,they dont neccessity to leave it.For examples,my father used to smoke when ı was a child,since he could find enough money to but a new packet cigarettes for his smoking.But ın my adolescence period our company went in bankrupt.For this reason,my father had to left smooking ,since he couldnt afford it.
When it comes to the solutions,above all,professional medical care is essential for the people who want to overcome addiction.So ministry of health should open new medical care houses in almost every suburb.In this way fortunately, they might find a chance to reach all people who are smooking.,since people who live in these suburbs might see these medical houses while even walking on the street and they might reach medical care in almost ever time.Beside,the price of the cigarette packets should be increased by the goverments.In this way lucklıy,people might not afford it easily and they might think to leave it,since all people know that smooking is not essential part of their life.And they have another priorities for thier life.Thats why they might use their precious salaries for their another requests rather than smooking.
In conclusıon,although smooking is realy hazardous for human health situations especiall their respiratory systems,they dont tend to leave it easily.This is because they have enought budget to afford it and also they are strong addicted to cigarettes because of the nicotine.Bur this can be overcome by constructing medical care houses in almost ever suburb and going up the price of cigarettes packets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as for, as to, for example, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49388753056 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50180295963 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491442542787 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.2975951904 503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 320.104963254 49.4020404114 648% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 561.75 106.682146367 527% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.25 20.7667163134 492% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 7.06120827912 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 59.0 5.01903807615 1176% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170945365249 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116135062543 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476239834876 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116135062543 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476239834876 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.6 13.0946893788 425% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -40.51 50.2224549098 -81% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 44.3 11.3001002004 392% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.29 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.1190380762 423% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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