In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
It seems increasingly common that the population in many affluent countries are aging consistently. In fact, this trend has some impacts on each person and the society considerably, and I can identify two remedies which governments can use to address these issues fully.
Perhaps the most widely-observed disadvantage of aging population on individuals is for the elderly to face financial worries and suffer isolation. This can be seen in many retired workers who have to rely heavily on their savings and tend to live apart from their children, which may be seen as a social norm these days. Another severe drawback would be the influence on general quality of life in some respects, as the increased number of the retired leads to the decreased quantity of working adults. This means that governments would receive less money in taxes in relation to the population’s size, thus creating a greater burden on many state-owned sectors’ budgets such as public healthcare services.
Regarding possible solutions, probably the most immediate step would be for governments to increase the current retirement ages, as we can see that many people from such age group are still conscientious and healthy enough to be productive. Another further long-term remedy could be to organize more social clubs, with various types of healthy activities, ranging from reading books, planting trees or walking with the sole purpose of promoting an active lifestyle. This may deter old people from feeling cut-off, as they can have more face-to-face interactions.
In conclusions, the increased aging population may in fact make the retired feel isolated and put more financial strain on younger working adults, but governments’ actions such as legislating proper laws associated with working ages and having initiatives to prevent sedentary lifestyles may lessen the severity of these drawbacks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45084745763 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02811493086 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.225664742 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.8 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132882070163 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544876043002 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263029586787 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807926221514 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304051934717 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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