In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that the average life expectancy has risen especially in developed countries. This could adversely affect both individual and society however, this issue can be tackled in more effective ways.
Old age people sometimes become an extra burden in a family and in the community. This is because, government, nowadays, is spending a greater amount of money in terms of pension which should go to other development in a nation such as transport system, roads, clean irrigation and so on. Consequently, the authority faces a massive financial crisis by maintaining pension schemes. Also, the opportunity among youngsters will decline due to lack of vacancy. In other words, the employer could not replace them in their work area this becuse the pension age is a little high. For instances, the retirement age in my country in India is sixty-five, but if it is fifty it could benefit both young talents and government.
There are some solutions to address these major concerns easily. Initially, the government could cut down the amount of pension or incentive otherwise, it goes their own pocket and therefore the growth and development are not possible in many countries. Thus, the government should more focus on other areas like women and child welfare rather than a pension. Another solution is that material support such as wheelchair, walking aid, other physical protection by the health authority can also save huge amount of money. So the money can not only save the nation but it also can save elder people.
In conclusion, increasing elder population always an existing problem in many countries. If the government take a right measure against for this , it can be deal in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06382978723 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74020465427 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4276343627 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171436172911 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543139707147 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532979824242 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118692041327 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652899062134 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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