In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
One question that has caused a great deal of controversy over the year is the tendency of living longer in industrialized parts. While the negative consequences of this issue could undoubtedly be inevitable, minimizing the effect of this potential trend could be gradually taken into considerations by the governments.
To begin with, it is undeniable that several problems caused by this phenomenon could be predicted. Obviously, the main issue is that this can affect the productivity and slow down the economy level in the long term of a country. The elderly, for example, can hardly suffer a complicated job when they fall to a decline of health condition, memory or suchlike matters compared to young people who just start their work and are full of energy.Secondly, the more old people, definitely the more governments have to spend on medical treatment. That is because they are prone to some serious deseases, and to cover these medical expenses will be exceedingly expensive for the governments.
On the other side, I would believe that there are some measures which should be taken by steps in order to mitigate this disturbing trend.One simple solution for this could be increasing the retirement age for those adult employees from 65 to 70. This solution can be taken for those workers who could withstand mental and physical pressure to dedicate more for working and earning money.Another measure is that governments can encourage immigration to increase the number of employees who pay taxes.Therefore, the amount of money that has been allocated to health care can be replaced by providing citizens with accomodation and transport facilities - the more important areas.
In conclusion, although the progress of life expectancy can cause negative consequences, governments ought to consider and embark on the presented solution so as to soften this trouble and invest in more significant areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30491803279 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0507616793 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.449852362 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.777777778 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8888888889 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257644096745 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107491779698 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701748894494 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145422081615 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388533728211 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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