In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problem will this cause of individuals and societies? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of the ageing population?
In recent decades, living conditions are getting better. This leads to the fact that the expectation of life in prosperous nations is on the rise. Despite the detrimental drawbacks of this phenomenon, governments can take steps to cope with these potential issues.
There is a large variety of consequences that stem from longer life expectancy. To begin with, the major problem is the lack of labor force which the key contributing factor behind hindering the development of a country. This can be illustrated by Canada, a nation belongs to North America, in which the number of old people accounts for about one fourth in total of population, that is the source why there are millions of people from around the world immigrating in this country on a yearly basis in order to add in the workforce. Not to mention that the significant climb on the proportion of aged citizens will include putting a heavy burden on the national budget, which means the more quantity of elderly population increase the more retired people claim pension benefits. Therefore, the pressure on working adults who are making a contribution to governments through tax revenue is also on the escalation.
When it comes to feasible solutions to deal with the trend described above, the first one that should be given by authorities is enacting suitable policies to encourage immigration to supplement the number of working adults. This not only helps states to obtain a great amount of money from the tax system but also creates a competitive labor market in which businesses have more chances to choose qualified human resources. The further measure would be to increase the retirement age to grow tax revenue from this age-group and reduce simultaneously several senior residents. It results in the heavy burden on the national budget would be split, thus authorities can the amount of redundant finance from the pension fund to allocate for other urgent services such as education, infrastructure, and environmental protection.
In conclusion, there are no rooms to deny the vast disadvantages of increasing life expectancy in thriving nations and hence, various measures can be taken to handle the problems that are convinced to arise as average life expectancy is rising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15803814714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88387149545 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58038147139 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3948187757 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.615384615 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202278978913 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064129300593 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637098379995 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12684813292 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528257088661 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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