With the development of technology and science, some people believe that there is no great value of artists such as musicians and painters. What are the things artists can do but the scientist cannot? Why should we encourage the art area?
It is true that science and technology, nowadays, have benefitted the whole world in all aspects. Albeit it is undoubted that various technological and scientific developments have tremedously enhanced our lifestyle, but i firmly believe that art, cultural and traditions still play an essential roles in out lives.
There are so many things that artists can teach us in the field that scientists have failed to. To begin with, there are concepts such as feelings, emotions and inspiration that comes from arts, whereas science and technology cannot offer them due to its focus on practicality. For example, an audience can indirectly experience and have a feeling of melody from listening to bethoven's pieces which was composed while he was suffering from unfortunate events. In contrast, science cannot offer this because it is unable to deliver such feeling. Additionally, a piece of abstract art has no meaning in science but has great stories to tell when we consider it an art. In the world of arts, beauty matter in and of themselves whereas in science, the only true measure is whether it works or not. Arts offer us a spritual look of life while scientist teaches us just an opposite.
Since the arts brings a lot of benefits to us so I argue that it must and should be encouraged to some extents. Enjoying arts promotes the habit of self-reflection. If you walk into the art gallery, attend to a concert or even just stay to read a book, you almost certainly begin to think about your inner value. For me, this is an invaluable lesson in life because if we begin to reflect about ourselves, we begin not to just become more human, but also consider the lies of other too. Moreover, creative people can boost us emotionally and change our feeling. For example, a lot of Mozart's fans would love to listen to his music pieces because they feel relieves and motivated, so music can controls our emotions and switch them in a positive ways.
In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that science and technology have great value in our life, but in term of arts, it can teaches us many aspects of life that the former cannot
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Suggestion: teach
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77088948787 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65725818505 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56064690027 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4335482259 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2190668973 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657237595137 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466818599489 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119666306705 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421540448795 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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