With the development of technology children are now living a world that is completely different to the past. What problems does this cause for society and family?
It seems likely that the flourishment in modern technology . Result that younglings currently are deeming to live in distinct world in comparison to the previous years. Plethora of troubles are created among the community and family. The following essay would justify my perspective.
The most prominent effect is less attraction among the society because brains are always busy in their phone for playing games and watching movies due to this they have no idea who is living around them. To elaborate, there are various electronic gadgets that have come in market which attract to toddlers. They do not have knowledge how to talk with others in society. Although, children participate in social occasions but they do not show their interest in it because they use their mobile phone for chatting with their friends and clicking picture which put harmful impact on their relationship between society. As a result, younglings do not know their neighbors because of technology.
However, it has also put impact on family relationships. Weak bonding within family members is main reason for it because nowadays parents are busy in their work. They have not enough time to spend with their brains. So, children are habitual to use their mobile phone all time which can increase the gap between parents and younglings. For example, children give more preference to their friends for video call and do not like to talk with their family members owing to this, parents scold to their children which put catastrophic impact on their health. As a consequence, children create plenty of issue between parents and children.
In conclusion, even though, there are ample of benefits of technology but we should not ignore the drawbacks of it which lead to problem for society and also for family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11604095563 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57672536926 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1267326495 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179538776264 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570381306444 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046247809465 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114264334292 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354162685941 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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