Development in technology has brought various environmental problems Some believe that people need to live to solve environmental problems Others however believe technology is the way to solve these problems Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In today's time, environmental problems emerged as a major problem. some people believe that if we live a simple life that is helpful to reduce to environmental problems. while others argue that technology is easy to tackle this problem. Both methods have their own importance.

First of all, if the people choose to simple life like they use the bicycle and organic farming these methods are eco-friendly. Because nowadays the use of fossil fuel, pesticides has reached its highest level and it is very dangerous to the environment. In a simple lifestyle, people prefer to live in the joint family than individual Which is helpful in reducing the wastage of resources on the earth.

But on the other hand, without technology any country can not move forward on the path of development, therefore it is necessary to overcome environmental problems by the scientific way. Many examples are there where technology is the use for the reduction of an environmental issue. like solar energy, wind energy, electronic vehicles are available in the market and the technique of generating energy from garbage has also been developed. So technology is very helpful in removing environmental problems.

In conclusion in the 21st century, we can not imagine our life without technology and it is compulsory for any country growth. So it is a better route if we solve the environmental problem with the help of technology.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09913793103 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96491260376 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4479069928 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266101094121 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947205530782 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863119368962 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171872176963 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760168965271 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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