The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most
prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English
becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages
and disadvantages of having one language in the world?
It is thought by some people that English, which is now the most widely spoken
language in the world, may one day predominate over all other languages and
result in their eventual disappearance. Having one language would certainly aid
understanding and economic growth but there will also be some drawbacks.
One evident benefit to having one global language is that it would enable greater
understanding between countries. In other words, if everyone spoke one
language, there would be complete understanding between not only countries
but all people throughout the world which would promote learning, the flow of
information and ideas. Another reason that one language would be advantageous
is that it would help economic growth. With all people speaking the same
language, there will be less barriers and therefore trade would flourish between
countries, resulting in a healthier world economy.
On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to having only one global
language. Firstly, it would mean that all other languages would eventually
disappear and, along with them, their cultures. The diversity of cultures is one of
the joys this world has to offer. Each culture is unique with its own way of life and
own perspectives of the world which would all be lost if there were only one
language. Secondly, it would result in the collapse of tourism because there
would be no reason to travel for pleasure if all countries had the same language
and similar cultures. This would devastate many countries economically that rely
on tourism as a source of income.
In conclusion, while there are plus points to having one global language, too much
would be lost as a result. Maintaining local languages and cultures should be
prioritized to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29351535836 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74548294809 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508532423208 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2516754891 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281744560678 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121113134886 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579875823733 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902876193637 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590130436521 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.