Directors and managers of organizations are often older people. Some people say that it is better for younger people to be leaders.
To what extent do you agree/disagree?
It is true that most of the organizations are managed by older people. Some people believe that young people should be held as the leaders of an organization. I completely disagree with this statement and think that the role of leadership requires experience which the majority of youth lacks in this generation.
Firstly, handling a business organization is all about having a long working experience. With several years of experience, the older people tend to develop skills such as problem solving, time management and decision-making skills. As a result, the older people can play the role of a manager more effectively with such improved qualities than the young people no matter how energetic they are. To illustrate this, it was revealed by a recent survey that business with experienced leaders are likely to survive longer in the market than other organizations which are managed by young people.
Secondly, young people often make mistakes and are required to be guided by the seniors. Since they have less work experience, the rise of complex problems in their working hours causes them to panic and make unproductive decisions. So, these sections of young generations cannot be trusted as a whole when it comes about management and responsibility. In fact, in many IT organizations, young programmers are often guided by the senior-level programmers. Hence, this situation proves that young people are not well fitted in leading an organization towards its goal.
In conclusion, I disagree that youth should be provided the opportunities to manage organizations as they lack enough working experience and skills and are more likely to commit mistakes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28947368421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02192274434 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8075207742 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243099972299 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962123721076 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660139689312 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156675054116 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481859000527 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.