Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having pets

Essay topics:

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having pets

Possessing domestic animals is relatively not a new concept. But, in more recent times, this trend has gained momentum, thanks to the pet lovers. However, maintaining a pet require special skills, and I believe human beings have a great pleasure and companionship with dogs and cats.
The virtues bestowed by owning pets are aplenty. The most remarkable thing is that animals play with children and adults in the house, they also interact by giving shake hand. Moreover, they protect and guard the home at nights and daytime from the strangers to enter the house. For instance, dogs can recognize and observe people behavior or movements and alert you by barking if anything seems strange. Again, dogs can also detect the culprits in a crime scene with the help of odor of the person.
On the other hand, the potential drawbacks in maintaining domestic animals is that they require large space in order to play and walk around. Furthermore, people need specific skills and knowledge about the pets, they wish to grow so that it will be easy for them to maintain pets. Last, but far from least, these pet can cause few kinds of illness to the human, when pets are attacked by virus and infections.
Therefore, on the basis of all the points discussed till now and by the personal experience as well. I would like to conclude that, since there are as many and as significant negatives as are positives, efforts must be made to minimize the former by taking certain precautions and care. So, that pets can be grown easily without hustle.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...by taking certain precautions and care. So, that pets can be grown easily without hustle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81132075472 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45971747141 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656603773585 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8789694492 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129667444879 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425970454229 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511097244901 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766187626625 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377683315464 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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