Do Advantages of Studying abroad overweigh its problems?
Nowadays, thanks to globalization, more and more students tend to go overseas for university courses. Studying in a foreign country has its own positive and negative sides, but personally I believe that study abroad has brought us more benefits than challenges.
Undoubtedly, there exist some drawbacks of studying overseas. One serious problem is financial burden. Because of the difference between economics of different countries, students should spend more on high living cost, expensive tuition fee, travel arrangement or insurance cover. Another negative aspect of learning in other countries is that students might be unfamiliar and uncomfortable as culture differences and language barriers. As a consequence, It might have a negative effect on their performance in studying as well as their mental conditions.
However, I would argue that its benefits are more considerable. One of the main advantages is students could study in stimulating learning environment. They might have access to a professional system with well-equipped facilities and distinguished teaching staff that they have never studied before in their countries, especially in developing countries. Additionally, studying overseas can help them obtain well-paid employment right after graduation. This is due to the highly-regarded qualifications in famous university such as Harvard, Cambridge. Furthermore, the people who learning in other countries might have more opportunities to experience the cultural diversity. During studying, they could meet and get more friends from varied culture around the world. This not only helps them enrich their knowledge about the other country but also makes them become more flexible and independent.
In conclusion, despite some downsides, studying abroad has more positive effects in terms of better education, great opportunities for future career and cultural diversity’s experience. Therefore, students should be encouraged to study in new country to have more opportunities to develop themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ulating learning environment. They might have access to a professional system wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93197278912 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23437733166 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.905128752 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155238181655 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053312527944 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582282382628 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101448965734 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273471080191 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.