Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before?
Throughout the history of mankind, it is true that no century witnessed more progress in technology than the 20th century did. Moreover, there is no doubt that living in the era of technological revolution make people around the world become increasingly interested in discovering the correlation between technological development and leisure time. In my opinion, while I agree that the development of technology has saved us more time on dozens of tasks, the busyness of human cannot be verified that its will stop in the foreseeable future.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that technology is ubiquitous and more comfortable nowadays. Thanks to modern technology, life has become faster, easier and more convenient. To illustrate, we can clearly see that Google has saved our time searching for information as well as Facebook has saved our time on social interactions. Similarly, Amazon, Tiki and Fahasa save very much time on delivering products so we can have a product in our hands with just a few clicks. It stands to the reason that technology can do extraordinary things for time-saving and take care of more and more problems so that we would have one less chore to consider.
On the other hand, people’s leisure lives have been contracted because of the ubiquity of higher technological tools such as smart phones and laptops with internet access make people available for their superiors wherever they go. For this reason, humans are more engaged in everyday processes than ever before. Furthermore, while modern technology makes us have more free time, it also makes the pace of life much quicker, which drives us to work harder. Because of the competition and fears of the loss of job, people are giving up their leisure times for educational opportunities with a school of thought that its might help deal with the quickness of life. It seems that the time budget is burned and more time should be invested in education for the reason that keeping up the speed of technological development. Therefore, using technology to improve efficiency and save time leads to high productively, people would rather do more job and do more relaxation.
In a conclusion, although the effectiveness of technology has brought more time in every aspect of life, we cannot deny the fact that humans seem busier than ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05194805195 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89625414554 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6296200096 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356329582108 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126672854288 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571515248355 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217114385095 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542066155498 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.