Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before?
Thanks to the technological breakthrough, rapid changes in the way people live has prompted. However, some people still doubtful about whether technology has given us more freedom time than earlier generations. In my opinion, it depends on how each gets the advantages brought by new technology.
On the one hand, it is clear that modern technology has liberated people from labor-intensive jobs which occupy a large part of their daily time. In terms of work environment, the factory has been fully computerized, enabling it to produce more effectively and efficiently. For example, the time production of a car has been decreased, owing to the robotics technology and conveyor belt which allowed mass production. From the perspective of household work, the technological revolution in the home started with the introduction of labor-saving appliances such as washing machine and dishwasher. Obviously, the amount of time saved from people's work can be allocated to their leisure activities.
On the other hand, some people become over-reliant on high-tech devices, so they find hardly for leisure activities. For instance, it is not an exaggeration to say that today the young generation spent more of their daily time on social media such as Facebook, Instagram than outdoor activities. These technological inventions exposure the young minds to a large amount of new information every day, leaving them no available time for their arts, sports. Moreover, spending too much time on their laptop or smartphone may lead to health problems for some youngsters.
In conclusion, I believe that modern technology has revolutionized the leisure time of people, but not all the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'inventions'' or 'invention's'?
Suggestion: inventions'; invention's
...outdoor activities. These technological inventions exposure the young minds to a large amo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38518518519 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11652086981 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0175491078 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25519377904 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862341505313 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706747565505 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160081680028 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317897035615 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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