Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money ?
Nowadays, most celebrities get paid a lot of money based on their fame. The amount of money they own every month can be many times higher than people working in offices or ordinary jobs. In my view, I strongly agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will explain for my views from my own knowledge.
There are some reasons why it makes sense for celebrities to be paid more than others. Firstly, they have very special talents and abilities. Those are the things that make them special. Additionally , with that special ability, they have to go through a lot of arduous training and must constantly strive to keep up with the trends of the times. Secondly, not only do they get paid monthly but they can also earn money by going to events. Celebrities work as ambassadors for famous brands through which they get paid to advertise at events large and small. Moreover, being a celebrity is not easy because their lives are not private because of the paparazzi and false rumors, they have to sacrifice a lot to dedicate themselves to the arts.
However, it is not entirely reasonable for a star to be paid too much.It is not equal for a celebrity to make so much money in one month. Each profession has its own pressure and requires its own ability and effort, so every industry needs equality. Furthermore, taking too seriously and paying too much for a celebrity is both wasteful and puts a lot of pressure on themselves. Most people will use the money to spend on useless purposes like branded items even they can spend thousands of dollars just to spend on one item. Not stopping there, when celebrities are paid too much, they will have to do to please the brand or the companies they represent. When they have a bit of a scandal ,their careers are almost empty.
In conclusion, it is true that a celebrity makes a lot of money when they really try.This really not wrong when a person is properly paid for their efforts and what they dedicate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61318051576 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45196131407 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9800413054 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237807394719 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804064975096 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827365220742 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14541119007 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593821104415 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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