Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience.
<p dir="ltr" id="docs-internal-guid-e6984aae-7fff-ea70-b907-7e6e4ec0a0e4" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -webkit-standard; white-space: normal; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Several years, being a famous person is easy. When they have fame, they also have a high income without difficulty. Some people believe that is adequate salary, however, others think it is too much. In this essay, I will consider three reasons that their earning is so high.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -webkit-standard; white-space: normal; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">First of all, essential workers often receive low salaries. Such as nurses and teachers have to work about eight hours per day, while some famous singer or actors not only perform a lot of hours but also earn from five to ten times as much as other. For example, basic salary of teachers about five millions VND, a show of singers may be up to one hundred millions VND.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -webkit-standard; white-space: normal; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In addition, celebrities are often born with their talent for singing or acting.They nearly have not spent years at university like doctors and engineers. When they join a competition, they win and everyone knows them, for instance The voice, Viet Nam got talent. Besides, most careers must have to learn from three to six years before they work.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -webkit-standard; white-space: normal; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">On other hand, most of them wastes their money on expensive houses, cars and parties.To give an illustration, Ngoc Trinh is a beautiful model in Viet Nam, she has just over one hundred shoes, each of them costs around one thousand dollars. Furthermore, some famous persons have at least one luxury villa. Not to mention, they often hold large parties.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -webkit-standard; white-space: normal; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In conclusion, each of jobs has different features, but I think that well - known artists are received too much remuneration.</span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3466.0 1615.20841683 215% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.93135011442 5.12529762239 155% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.77868453315 2.80592935109 242% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475972540046 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 884.7 506.74238477 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 294.399320651 49.4020404114 596% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 346.6 106.682146367 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.7 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0223359100522 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019684093882 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203762827599 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0223359100522 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.8 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.01 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 29.6 12.4159519038 238% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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