Do you Agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money Give reasons for your answer

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Entertainment is significian in life ,so famous people such ac singers ,actors...
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...n life ,so famous people such ac singers ,actors,models who benefit from this fiel...
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...so famous people such ac singers ,actors,models who benefit from this field.It is argum...
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...tors,models who benefit from this field.It is argument that they are paid far too ...
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...nt that they are paid far too much money .In my opinion, I tend to agree that they...
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... that they are paid far too much money .In my opinion, I tend to agree that they d...
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...r delication and effort. First of all,as other professions,celebritieshave to gi...
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...rt. First of all,as other professions,celebritieshave to give a lot of time and relentless tr...
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...n the hopes of shinning in the limelight .For example,, Korean trainees who spent ...
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...the hopes of shinning in the limelight .For example,, Korean trainees who spent man...
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...f shinning in the limelight .For example,, Korean trainees who spent many years ef...
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...y years efforting against thounsands of ones ro reserve a debut .Secondly,not everyo...
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...st thounsands of ones ro reserve a debut .Secondly,not everyone has a rich artisti...
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... thounsands of ones ro reserve a debut .Secondly,not everyone has a rich artistic talent...
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...nds of ones ro reserve a debut .Secondly,not everyone has a rich artistic talent tha...
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...go through the process of harsh training ,so that thay can compete in a fast-firin...
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... fast-firing work environment. Therefore,They absolutely deserve be paid a high incom...
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...ment. Therefore,They absolutely deserve be paid a high income for their efforts. ...
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...h helps decuation and healthof community .In fact, Professtions such as teachers,d...
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...helps decuation and healthof community .In fact, Professtions such as teachers,doc...
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... .In fact, Professtions such as teachers,doctors,engineers who have a more stable salary...
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...re stable salary than well-known people.Because they do not have retirement pensions th...
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...oncert and profit from the music product .While the the new celebrities just appea...
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...cert and profit from the music product .While the the new celebrities just appear and...
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...nd profit from the music product .While the the new celebrities just appear and the old...
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...nd profit from the music product .While the the new celebrities just appear and the old...
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...order to maintain their social position.It is undeniable that famous people are in...
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...isadvantages or donate charitable funds.Futher more,the spiritual contributions of cel...
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...s or donate charitable funds.Futher more,the spiritual contributions of celebrities ...
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...so inspire the dynamic. In conclusion,I belive that celebrities appropriate be ...
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...aid far much money for their dedication.Because every occupations are equal,no job is m...
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...tion.Because every occupations are equal,no job is more noble than any one,as long ...
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...ons are equal,no job is more noble than any one,as long as they work true
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... equal,no job is more noble than any one,as long as they work true
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2439862543 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45567803119 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632302405498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 271.955878774 49.4020404114 550% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.2 106.682146367 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.2 20.7667163134 280% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.8 7.06120827912 436% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184234858016 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109647812306 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056858226462 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123800948108 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529708541184 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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