Do you feel the effects of tourism are more positive or negative for the host country

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Suggestion: , tourism
In the era of globalisaton,tourism is becoming an increasing trend all ove...
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... an increasing trend all over the world.It is strongly felt that it has many benef...
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... has many benefits as well as drawbacks.Although,most people intrude into the country wi...
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... has many benefits as well as drawbacks.Although,most people intrude into the country wi...
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...y benefits as well as drawbacks.Although,most people intrude into the country with a ...
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...lenty of troubles into the host country.Thus,it is thought by many that it ties comp...
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...y of troubles into the host country.Thus,it is thought by many that it ties complet...
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...es completely a strong relationship with other countries when you try to being a ...
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...lity and treating them in a good manner.I will describe these why it is so effect...
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Suggestion: this why; these whys
...g them in a good manner.I will describe these why it is so effective for the host in my e...
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...tive for the host in my essay Firstly,it is so common to see if you travel to ot...
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...ravel to other country for holdaymaking so as to enjoy the visual benefits of such sight...
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...by the aid of guide in the host country.This means that they treats trourists like b...
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...n the host country.This means that they treats trourists like being in a friendly way ...
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...s that they treats trourists like being in a friendly way or just explained in detail.To illustra...
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...riendly way or just explained in detail.To illustrate this,when visitors go to ent...
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...t explained in detail.To illustrate this,when visitors go to entertaining places or h...
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...be best depicted by guiders. Secondly,Having showed such sights in an efficient way,...
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.... Secondly,Having showed such sights in an efficient way,they begin understanding the cultures,t...
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...g showed such sights in an efficient way,they begin understanding the cultures,tradit...
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...ay,they begin understanding the cultures,traditions of other and being aware of their hospi...
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... unforgettable impression in their head.For example,some people want to know the or...
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...ble impression in their head.For example,some people want to know the origin of somet...
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Suggestion: woven
...uch as traditional clothes how they are weaved in host country ,this will be illustrat...
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...thes how they are weaved in host country ,this will be illustrated vividly.So,it r...
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...untry ,this will be illustrated vividly.So,it really makes an interesting point to...
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...try ,this will be illustrated vividly.So,it really makes an interesting point to th...
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... interesting point to them. To sum up,those are undeniable that make a robust ally ...
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...ust ally of host country by guest state.Thus,it maintains the relations they interac...
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...ally of host country by guest state.Thus,it maintains the relations they interact v...
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...s they interact via visiting each other.For that reason, by opening tourism doors t...
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...ing tourism doors to every guest country,we will make a huge improvement to their o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1514084507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3974092928 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 20.2975951904 463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 321.712086603 49.4020404114 651% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 487.666666667 106.682146367 457% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.6666666667 20.7667163134 456% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.3333333333 7.06120827912 585% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170485540219 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10895448916 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403752046302 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102316905194 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296973174062 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.2 13.0946893788 383% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.93 50.2224549098 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 11.3001002004 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.69 8.58950901804 148% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 10.1190380762 391% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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