Do you think people in your community are generally happy or unhappy? Give three reasons for your answer.
I think happiness levels can be based on numerous factors, economic stability, good relationships, and good health are three potential reasons for happiness in my community. To begin with, economic stability means most people have a stable job and earn enough money for their lives, so they are more likely to be happier. Moreover, basic necessities such as food, shelter, and healthcare are provided if you have money. Gradually, finances can help families satisfy their entertainment needs, like shopping, traveling, or developing new skills. From there, they can get rid of stress or anxiety about finances. In addition, it’s so important that you have a good relationship. Residents in my community always get along well with their family, relatives, friends, and neighbors. For example, when someone has many people beside them, family, friends, and neighbors can offer encouragement, empathy, and understanding, helping individuals cope with stress, grief, and other emotional difficulties. From then on, people are able to recover their sadness and disappointment, as well as have a better mood. Last but not least, having good health also makes people happy. When individuals are in good health, they can engage in activities they enjoy without discomfort or limitations. Furthermore, a healthy body can help the mind function better, improving concentration, memory, and decision-making abilities. Therefore, people are more likely to approach life with enthusiasm and optimism, leading to a positive outlook and higher levels of happiness. In short, these are just a few factors that can influence the happiness levels within my community. I think we can choose other elements in life for pleasure to improve our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...re more likely to be happier. Moreover, basic necessities such as food, shelter, and healthcare a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in addition, in short, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47014925373 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00287602544 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1563954798 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129022347267 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417792545787 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417122354974 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129022347267 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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