Does the advantages of public transportation outweigh the disadvantages to what extend do you agree or disagree?
There no doubt that public transportation has become quintessential in our day to day life. people can use it to go to work or visit their families. I completely believe that the merits of public transportation outweigh the demerits of it. In this essay the advantages will be discussed associated with my own opinion and supporting examples.
First of all, using public buses and metro can be quite affordable, the price of tickets in some countries are cheap. Furthermore, a trip by a private car can be expensive, this predominantly because the cost of gas in nowadays is relatively high. For example, a certain traveled distance by a private transportation might cost threefold by the public ones. if members of the society choose to use their own vehicles rather than public transportation it might affect their ability to spend on essentials such as rent, food and leisure pursuits.
Secondly, choosing public transportation can reduce the heavy traffic in the heart of main cities. In other meaning, if a group of people consist of 30 or 40 member going to the same destination on one bus would be far better for the traffic than every one go with their cars. For instance, in large cities the transportation, which host a number of people has an allowance to take a fast track roads. Unless people start to use public transportation the pressuring problem of crowd will remain, even if the government invest more money in the construction of new roads.
In conclusion, public transportation helps people to save more money for what are more important and could solve a huge problem like crowd inside the countries. I fully agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98586572438 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03751305097 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5074263233 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184780602468 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738284624139 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702377434497 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127138667962 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556189833684 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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