Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer
According to me, doing a enjoyable activity with their child is more beneficial than reading to further development and more creativity. I completely agree with this statement and I shall explore some various points related to this topic.
How enjoyable activity is more beneficial than reading? A fundamental reason for this essay is that there is no biological age for reading the book. Furthermore, parents throughout the world place spend time with their oppspring where their literacy skills are further developed; however, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental and participating in fun activities. For example, in the uk, many boys are reluctant readers and forced them to read the books, but this turned them off reading. By focusing on other activities and developing other skills such as creativity and imagination. When they are ready to read, they usually acquire this skill rapidly. In addition to this, through play, child's can learn more vocabulary and cognitive skills. Besides, through enjoyable activities, childern always feel the relaxation, which help them for body growth and they can get any kind of knowledge with their own interest.
Furthermore, play allows youngsters to mature emotionally and self confidence. There is no scientific research reading in early age is essential for child development. For example in the Finland early education focuses on playing. Reading is only encouraged if children show their interest and get this skill.
Infact, finland was ranked the sixth best in the world in terms of reading
Despite being a supporter of this non-reading approach, I strongly recommend incorporating bedtime stories into a child’s daily routine. however reading as a regular daytime activity should be swapped for something which allows the child to develop other skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43298969072 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82138327556 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611683848797 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9910358339 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199873260797 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727994760032 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736562511069 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104764052036 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888944608438 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.